The revision strategy I found most useful this week was receiving comments from my classmates and from Stephanie. This was most useful because I felt like my structure and everything else was good and I just wanted to work on the flow. Based on the qualities of an exemplary narrative we wrote today, I feel like my narrative is hitting most of the things we covered. This weekend I want to revise all of Stephanie's comments by adding more information to certain parts of my narrative.
I feel like the writing norms we have set for class have been working pretty well. I like the quiet, but I still would rather have a little background music because listening to my Ipod is too distracting.
Out of all of the questions Stephanie listed for potential arguments, I feel most passionate about what San Diego can do to help the homeless community. The reason I am passionate about this topic is because my grandma is in charge of a church where she facilitates a lot of volunteering for homeless people. I participate in almost all of the events she plans and am very involved in it.
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